Reviewer: EliteWarrior
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Date: Feb 01, 2005 10:32 PM
Title: Story
Listen, I understand joke stories and such, as I'm quite fond with them, but this is below sub-par in my book. There was no grammar in it, no different paragraphs, and no proper quoting skills. Plus, it was a little too short for my liking. 3/10. Here, go read Kasuto's "Skills for new writers" in his fan-fiction part of the site, and rewrite it. I'm sure it'll be much better.